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[Seraphimon-T.K.]

για την ακρίβεια αν πεθάνει η hinata(seraphimon ζεις?)o Naruto δν θα κλάψει αλλά θα τα γ*******ι όλα...9 ουρές ταυτόχρονα θα βγάλει..

Όι-Όι! Αυτα δεν τα λεμε ουτε για αστειο

Τελικα οντως η Σιζουνε πηγε αδικα χαμενη... Η κακομοιρα η Τσουναντε...Η Σιζουνε ηταν το μονο που ειχε απομεινει απο τον αγαπημενο της Dan...

[Mad_Hatter]

Spoiler:

εγινε βατραχος επειδη αποροφησε το chakra?Να δω τι αλλη ******* θα σκεφτει ο mangaka.Α re kishi, παει, Kubo εγινες και εσυ.

[Seraphimon-T.K.]

Spoiler:

εγινε βατραχος επειδη αποροφησε το chakra?Να δω τι αλλη ******* θα σκεφτει ο mangaka.Α re kishi, παει, Kubo εγινες και εσυ.

Ρε Ριν,σκεφτηκες ΠΡΙΝ το γραψεις το παραπανω? Ας κανουμε μια μικρη αναδρομη στην εκπαίδευση του ναρουτο... Σε τι πηγαινε να μεταμορφωθεί με το sage chakra thing? Ασε θα σου απαντησω εγω : Σε βατραχο... Τι θα γινει αυτος που απορρόφησε το sage chakra και δεν ξερει να το χειρίζεται? Αυτο θα το αφησω σε σενα

[Melkor]

r.i.p. Shizune....
r.i.p. Fukasaku

P.S. (this is my comeback. lets hope it lasts)

[Mad_Hatter]

Ρε Ριν,σκεφτηκες ΠΡΙΝ το γραψεις το παραπανω? Ας κανουμε μια μικρη αναδρομη στην εκπαίδευση του ναρουτο... Σε τι πηγαινε να μεταμορφωθεί με το sage chakra thing? Ασε θα σου απαντησω εγω : Σε βατραχο... Τι θα γινει αυτος που απορρόφησε το sage chakra και δεν ξερει να το χειρίζεται? Αυτο θα το αφησω σε σενα

Spoiler:

το προβλημα φιλε sera ειναι οτι ο kishi δεν ειναι ρεαλιστικος.ενταξει ισος ειπα λαλακια παραπανω ,αλλα αν μου λεει οτι ο pein δε τραυματισε ουτε στο ελαχιστο το naruto οταν αυτος ηταν αναισθητος μπροστα του για να σιγουρεψει τη νικη του, και τωρα τη γλιτωνει με ενα τετοιο τροπο ε το βρισκω μλκια .Με λιγα λογια ο kishi δεν ειναι ποια ρεαλιστικος και κανει kubies για να γλιτωσει τον ηρωα του.

Edited by Rin, 11 February 2009 - 16:08.

[SSJGojeta]

Εσύ όταν έχεις κάποιον που θες να αιχμαλωτήσεις, πιασμένο και αναίσθητο, αρχισε να τον πυροβολάς στο πόδι, σπάσε του κάνα κόκκαλο, πάρε του το κεφάλι βρε αδερφέ, μήπως και σου φύγει ο αναίσθητος αιχμάλωτος, κι όλα αυτα μετά από λίγα δευτερόλεπτα που έπεσε αναίσθητος. Είπαμε ρε συ, να είσαι αντι- Naruto, να λατρεύεις τον Pain, αλλά και λίγο ρεαλισμός δεν πειράζει....

[Mad_Hatter]

Εσύ όταν έχεις κάποιον που θες να αιχμαλωτήσεις, πιασμένο και αναίσθητο, αρχισε να τον πυροβολάς στο πόδι, σπάσε του κάνα κόκκαλο, πάρε του το κεφάλι βρε αδερφέ, μήπως και σου φύγει ο αναίσθητος αιχμάλωτος, κι όλα αυτα μετά από λίγα δευτερόλεπτα που έπεσε αναίσθητος. Είπαμε ρε συ, να είσαι αντι- Naruto, να λατρεύεις τον Pain, αλλά και λίγο ρεαλισμός δεν πειράζει....

αν ο αντιπαλος σου ειναι ενα 16χρονο που κινηται σα τον flash ,εχει δυναμη να πεταξει ενα ρινοκερο που ειναι οσος μια πολυκατικια και εχει μεσα του τον δυνατοτερο demon ever λογικο δεν ειναι να θελω να σιγουρεψω τη νικη μου?Θυμασε ο kisame τι ειχε κανει στο jinchouriki του?Νεκρο σχεδον τον ειχε αφησει.

[Melkor]

αληθεια, ο Pein, το κυριο σωμα που βλεπουμε εστω, ποσων χρονων ειναι?

[Mad_Hatter]

αληθεια, ο Pein, το κυριο σωμα που βλεπουμε εστω, ποσων χρονων ειναι?

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[SSJGojeta]

Ξέρει όμως ότι δεν είναι σε sage mode οπότε δεν μπορεί να κινηθεί τόσο γρήγορα και εξ'άλλου ο άλλος που του αποροφάει το chakra, είναι κολλημένος πάνω του, οπότε δεν τον θεωρεί κίνδυνο, ίδια σκηνή με τον neji chuunin exams.

[Sora]

Spoiler: unconfirmed

Pain: - The Kyuubi is captured, mission complete.
Madara: - Ok, head out.
Pain: - Ok.
"Pain looks around and see Ma and Pa Chanting"
Pain: - That won't work on God again.
"Closeup on Pa:s face, he's sweating"

Inside Narutos mind at the Fox gate:
"Naruto wakes" - What? But I'm not done yet..
Fox: - your Weak Naruto. Release me! I will tear him apart!

Outside again: Hinata: - Naruto! I must go to him!
"Hinata Jumps away before Ko can stop her."
Ko: - Hinata!

"Hinata lands some ways away from pain and Naruto. Naruto is in Hungry ghosts grip."
Hinata: - Naruto!
"Closeup on Hinatas face then on narutos unconscious face then Hinata again, getting angry/upset"
Hinata: What have you done to Naruto! I won't forgive you!
"Hinata Charges Hungry ghost Pain"
Pain: - Foolish girl...

Inside Naruto:
Naruto: - I won't release the seal, I can still fight! I'm strong! I'll never depend on you, you Demon!
Fox: - Why do you fight? You will not last without me..Such Powers, wasted... Curse your father's seal Curse Minato..."The fox Growls"
"Close up on Narutos face" He looks shocked"
Naruto : - The fourth!?....My father!?...
"The Fox demon focuses his eyes on Naruto"
Fox: - Ohh..You didn't know?..... "The fox begins a big grin.."
Fox: - It seems you are a fool after all, your weak without me.
"The fox start to laugh his slow evil laugh, the laugh gets louder in the mind of Naruto and echoes enveloping all. Naruto covers his ears and head with his hands and covers" "Closeup on Narutos eyes from the side, his eyes is confused and starting to change to kyuubi"
Naruto: - Stooop it! Leave me alone!!

Outside Naruto:
" Zoomout on Ma and Pa starting the Jutsu, Human ghost flashes behind them stopping them by smashing Ma away and Pa jumps to the side"
Pa: - Ma! " He looks towards Naruto that is now on the ground where HG left him and then towards Hinata that is getting close and whispers"
Whispering pa: - Naruto, forgive us.

"Hinata closes in on HG and begins a Jutsu. GH doge and jumps behind her.
He launches at her With a kunai drawn"
Pa: Hinata!
" Closeup on hinatas eyes as she looks behind. She closes them and Focuses.
Hinata starts spinning calling her Justu defense name:" -Shugohakke Rokujūyon Shō "Hinata deflects HG and he is diverted to the side of Hinata."
"closeup on God realms face"
God realm: - Shinra tensei!
"The ground at Hinatas feet erupts in an explosion sending Pa flying and Hinata flies backwards from the shock. Towards God realm.
Hinata crashed onto the ground grinning badly. She opens her eyes and looks to see Hungry Ghost coming from above with the Kunai. She looks Sad/ surprised"
Hinata in a desperate voice: - Naruto......

Inside Naruto:

"Naruto is on the floor in front of the gate screaming clamping his head as the Kyuubi laughs."
Fox : Ha ha ha ha Release me fool!
"Suddenly a voice cuts the laughter and all become silent."
- Naruto!
"Naruto opens his eyes in surprise, his head turns to the side fast and focuses on the darkness around"
Naruto: - Hinata?!

Outside Naruto again:
" Naruto opens his eyes quickly awake.
He see Hungry Ghost over Hinata with the kunai in her chest. Her head is turned towards him, some blood sips out of her mouth"
Hinata: - N a r u t o o oooo....

"Seeing this Naruto rushes to his feet and runs towards Hinata, Again closeup on God realms face"
God Realm: - Oh so your awake? this is what happens when you go against God.
"Naruto closes on HG"
God realm: - Shinra tensei!
"Naruto is pushed back and falls to the ground screaming"
Naruto : - Hinata!
Hinata: -Naruto....
"Hinatas eyes closes"
"naruto gets up on his knees and huffs in exhaust. He looks down on his hands in dismay. He hears the Kyuubi laugh in his ears"
"Naruto breaths heavy and looks again on Hinata and then on God realm"
God realm: - do you now understand how you hurt others? Come with me and this girl might live.

"Naruto still hears the Kyuubi laughter, His eyes confused and face filled with rage he begins to falter. His eyes turning reddish"
Naruto: - Kyuubi......"Naruto hisses the word" - So much pain..for this....
Naruto : - You want the Kyuubi?? "Naruto looks at Hinata again and his teath starts to form fangs, he is getting angrier at the second"
"Naruto looks at Pa and Ma lying some ways away. his hair starts to shift as red chakra pours out. Naruto turns his monstrous gaze on Pain"
Naruto: - Move out of the way of Hinata "Naruto hisses" - or you will regret it..
God realm: - Oh, the kyuubi is it? So you won't come quietly?
"HG pushes te Kunai further into Hinatas chest, she couches blood"
"Naruto gets angrier but starts to fight it" " he thinks of the summoning scroll"

Kyuubi: - it's to late Naruto, there is no time, your weak. Let me tear him apart and I will save the woman.
Naruto: No......Must find the scroll....
"Naruto falls to his knees exhausted and his eyes Close and he starts to fall towards the ground. Zoom in on his hand blocking his fall, it has claws" "His eyes open and their fully kyuubi".
Naruto wispers: Lend me your powers once again Kyuubi...to save those close to me. I will be rid of you one day, open the seal...I swear it. But now I'm out of time. To survive and to save everyone, lend me powers enough to gain my Sannin mode once more....
Fox: - Ohh...Do you really need me?
Naruto: - Yes, I acknowledge that.
Fox: - I will hold you to your word with the seal..
Naruto: - Ok...now:
Naruto and Fox in one voice: Let's tear him apart!

"Narutos body is enveloped in red chakra and he gazes on Pain"
Naruto: - You will release her!
"Naruto Moves in a red flash towards God realm."
God realm: What do you think you can still do? I am god, Shinra tensei!
"As the wave is about to hit naruto he emits a roar of red chacra nullifying God realms Shinra tensei!" God realm is surprised! Naruto leaps towards God realm who dodge at last minute"

God realm: - So this is the power of the Kyuubi....

" Naruto Jumps at the scroll and does a fast reverse summon, releases the Kage bunshin and enters Sage mode combined with the red chakra"

"Closeup on hinatas face, on god realms shocked face and on Naruto who is shocked with the power surge he gained with Demon/Sage mode"

--------- Next chapter: The truth about pain and the Kyuubi"--------------

Edited by Sora, 11 February 2009 - 17:27.

[Hatake Kakashi]

Full script

Spoiler:

Nagato: This...

Fukasaku observes this (I see! That Pein was absorbing too much of Naruto-chan's Senjutsu chakra and had turned into the [frog-stone]!)

Naruto tries to break loose
Nagato:!

Scene change
Ino: Shikamaru!

Ino, Ino-dad, Anbu and anbu-carrying Shizune arrive to shikamar
Shiho:!?

Shikamaru: ! Ino - you were all right?
Ino: Yeah... but Shizune-san was...
Shikamaru: Wait... is she...?
Scene ends

Bunta: Dammit! (My bones all over broken! Ouch...!) The other frogs are down too.

Scene to Shikamaru guys again

Shikamaru: I see... is that what happened...
Shizune is lying on her side
Ino: If we were more cautious... this would not have...
Shikamaru: ... we can't waste Shizune-senpai's death. Let's figure out the mystery of Pein that she was working on, and no excuses until we find the 'real body' of his!
Shikaku: ...Shikamaru you need to put it a little bit kinder...
Ino dad: No... it's exactly how Shikamaru put it. What we must do now is to figure out where the real body of Pein is.
Shikaku: Inoichi - someone of your skill should be able to pick up the enemy's chakra and figure out where the real body of Pein is... right?
Ino dad: I have already tried... the enemy is constantly changing the frequency of his chakra. Tracing it is impossible.

Scene to Naruto

Fukasaku is stabbed by Nagato's sword (the same one that stabbed Jiraiya)
Nagato: quite formidable...
Naruto trips

Shima:Tou-chan! (Fukasaku)
Naruto glares
Naruto: You!... Seriou...!!
He tries to punch Nagato, but Nagato swings the sword that stabbed Fukasaku, Fukasaku is thrown off the sword and towards Naruto

Nagato raises his left hand, does his drawing-objects-toward-him jutsu

When Naruto's movements stop, Nagato grabs Naruto's neck. Naruto drops Fukasaku. Nagato slams Naruto to the ground.
Naruto: Gua!

When slamming him down, Nagato stabs Naruto's left hand with his sword. The rinnegan appears 'behind' Naruto (we have seen this a couple times before - Jiraiya, Kakashi)
Nagato: will you settle down a bit now, Kyuubi?
Naruto: Ggg..

Fukasaku is down. Shima is crying.
Naruto: What the hell are you!!? What the hell do you want!!? Why do you do this!!?
Nagato: Why... Everything happens all of a sudden. The reasons you realize after the events have passed. I see... let's chat a bit...

Scene to Shikamaru

Shikamaru: Gather information via Katsuyu from all the people that have come in contact with Pein. Those that have passed away may have also left some information. We'll carry out dead bodies if we have to!
Ino dad: ...! (carrying a dead body) wait... i see - I think I (am beginning to) understand!

Ριξτε μια ματια και εδω

volume 45 cover

Spoiler:

Ειναι φανταστικη ετσι ?

Edited by Hatake Kakashi, 11 February 2009 - 18:15.

[HeLLBoiS]

Spoiler:

Αυτος που το μετεφρασε απο τα γαλλικα στα αγγλικα μαλλον ετρεμε απο συγκινηση για τον Fukasaku:wis:

[°•πίΟu-πίΟu•°™]

Sora-kun ειναι πολυ fake το δικο σου, αλλα το πρωτο μερος μαρεσε πολυ, ειδικα εκει που το κιουμπι του λεει για τον Μινατο.. Ωραιο σκηνικο αυτο!

τα υπολοιπα βαριομουν να τα διαβασω

Κακασι, αυτο ειναι confirmed?

[Azathoth]

sora, το δικό σου είναι too long το be true. αυτό του Kakashi φαίνεται γνήσιο και tbh μου αρέσει πολύ ως ιδέα ;P
τι τέλειο! είμαστε σίγουρη πως πέθανε η Shizune, λογικά πέθανε και ο Pa. το μονο που λείπει είναι ένας νεκρός Kakashi, το κερασάκι στην τούρτα
anyways i think πως είναι πολύ νωρίς για να είμαστε σίγουροι